This story is epically awesome, not to mention original. I'm so happy with your characterization - it couldn't have been more spot on! And as a yaoi fan... I'll take what message I want, but I'll say that this story would not have been better, and quite possibly would have been much worse, if there had been any romance. XD Yes indeed.

And I so want the goddess to die. Bloodily, if possible. >.>

-Verg
:3

this story is so deep... i love it

Scuttle off little story, over to my favorites! I really enjoyed this. I love the Zoro Sanji nakama dynamic but this is in itself just an incredibly nicely thought up story. Thanks a lot!

have only started chapter two but i'm enjoying this so much (the banter an' all) i thought i should tell you. Thanks to this enjoyable style i might even read that other starky and hutch fic although i wasn't initially interested.

This was extremely awesome, fantastic, and that almost exceeds my vocabulary. Anyway, I loved it really, one of the best EVER! That means EVER! Okay, I'm done, OR AM I?! Yeah I am, but seriously, very awesome story loved it with all my heart!

That was a really enjoyable read.
I like how it wasn't a yaoi fic, (which I do read, but it's just hard to find a good fic w/o pairings ;)
So yeah, nice work!

Very good writing. It was so easy to read more laid-back english instead of the damn strict language you find in an ordninary book.
You dividived the story very well in pieces.

I really like that you chosed Zoro and Sanji as the main characters, sort of can have something to do with that Zoro is my favourite character, not only In One Piece but of all characters what so ever.
I thought it was just a hint to bleedy between those two just somewhere in the middle of the novel. But afterwards I can't see why it would be any different if this actually would happen in the real One Piece.

I loved the way you really could make the reader sure about that it was Sanji and Zoro you were writing about. You catched their personalitys just perfect.

Keep the good work up! I'll surely would read something with Zoro in it from you again.

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Lisbeth
Sweden

omg this is amazing!

i luved how it was so descriptive and when i read it, it felt like i was actually there watching what was happening!!

thanx so much for sharing this!

ur awesome!

Now THAT, that is what Nakama is.


Sweet story you've got here. Natural enough, though I do wonder how Luffy and the others never got word during the stay or something.

Still I loved the way you put their relationship. I'm a fan.^^

Wow... I was browsing for some ZoroxSanji fanfic yesterday when I suddenly clicked this fic... And i was like, 'ok, I'll read this one...' While reading (the second chapter), i found myself screaming-- OMG! A Black Out! And i forgot what the title was... so I browsed again (since my search history's always get deleted)... Then I found it again and read it... After reading... I don't quite know how to react... it's just... it's just too great! The best fic I ever read! I was like-- OHMIGOD! This is the fic I've been waiting for! I really like your story and while reading it, I've always thought what's gonna happen next and so on... When I finished it, I was a little sad. But then, I can just read it all over again! Hehe! Um... Do you mind if I make a manga using this story? It's so good like even when I was reading it, I can picture the characters as if I was just watching not reading! So, if you don't mind, I would like to get your permission to make this a manga. If I finished I'll be sure to upload it and send it to you. ^^ I'll browse more and read your other stories! ByeBye!

I know you wrote this back in '04, and here I am in '09 reading it, but I had to write a review anyway.
I loved this! It was amazing! You wrote the characters so well. And the plot... perfect.
Beautiful, really.
Best of luck in life and all that good stuff.

I have to get off the computer, but I have to say,

This. Is. Amazing.

Really. If I had time I'd blather on and on but I don't. D:

You are one of the best authors I know. Definitely a fave.

--WK

I really adore this story. Thanks so much for writing it. X3

lol, of course zoro would threaten to kill a goddess.

WOW!?!? THAT WAS FANTASTIC. So far my no.1 favourite story! Congratulations!Really loved it! Hope to hear more from you!