 ABundleOfDaydreams 1/5/12 . chapter 2:) |
 de orga 11/11/10 . chapter 10gomen, this review is kinda late, but, i just love your writing style. tanx for sharing, this is great. v |
 jo 8/23/10 . chapter 10 THATS IT? i feel cheated, :( but GREAT WORK anyway! loved it! ;D |
 Serenity Hidden 1/3/10 . chapter 10No, this is really complete! Oh well, at least I won't have to wait for teh rest of the completely delicious story. Go Iruka, catching Kakashi off guard! |
 neokid93 9/1/07 . chapter 5that's a pretty funny intermission...by the end of it i couldn't stop laughing and the rest of the fanfic is for the most part well written in fact my reader's intuition can't predict what happens next like it normally does that makes this one excited it does(kenshin) |
 SongoftheDarquePhoenix 7/31/07 . chapter 10This story managed to make me smile :) |
 Lovely Spell 5/17/07 . chapter 10awesome end. and it even had a little hint of smexy kakairu... genius. ... well now back to my story writing ... |
 Lovely Spell 5/17/07 . chapter 9aw this was really cute... and yay Iruka kicks... he does... stupid ebisu...pwned... hehehe ... anywhoo umm i'll stop talking and move on...great chapter! |
 Lovely Spell 5/17/07 . chapter 8no endings will not do...but i'll go on. |
 Lovely Spell 5/17/07 . chapter 7i likes... naruto is...special. . |
 Lovely Spell 5/17/07 . chapter 6yay...you see that's when kakashi should have kissed iruka...at least he did in my imagination...then he ruined the story by taking him then and there ;] ...
but your version seems better..in a way |
 Lovely Spell 5/17/07 . chapter 4awesome even as "filler" i really like kakashixiruka...but their love as more than friends isn't always necessary... i do wonder what you chose... there's no kakaxiru in the summary so i assume you didn't go for it...
*don't worry i have made breakfast [again] ...naruto would be proud! hooray for oriental flavored ramen!* |
 Lovely Spell 5/17/07 . chapter 3yay! ...and yes...mizukixiruka ... those are nice to think of... well onto the next chapter...*its your fault i left the kitchen to read this chapter and I burnt everything...:[ wa...but it was worth it.* |
 Lovely Spell 5/17/07 . chapter 2this is very interesting... i really like it...i think i'll go on...:] |
 Lovely Spell 5/17/07 . chapter 1oh very interesting indeed ... *must keep reading* |