very nice!! please update really really soon! please don't give up on this story- i really like it so far! it's going on my favorites- but if you don't update a lot ill take it off!

Is there going to be anymore?
I am really enjoying it so far! Please continue!!

WOW!! Very cool!! :)
I love this fiction. So much action and so well described. Please, keep writing. I'm really interested in it! :)

Hi, dont want you to think i am stalking you or anything (lol), just reading your fic again, and thought id inform you that if you do write more ( :) ) i will read it, so you wont have wasted your time!! lol. sorry! im going now lol ;)

I like the way you've isolated Jack and created a situation with no allies - just enemies on both sides. Looking forward to the next chapter

Thankyou, thankyou! Great chapter, Jack would kick anyones **! Hope theres more! Chloe.

For some reason Iv only just stumbled upone this but it sounds like a good start. Hope to read more soon.

The beginning establishes a terrific tone and premise. I noticed you also started a James Bond fic, but chose not to continue. Hope you'll follow-up on this.