very very good i like how u torture the thing. laughs evil oh will i hate people who dont understand YOU or ME email me back i would like to talk to u

this was the most nastiest story i have ever read i love pokemon

O_O whoa. Thats real disturbing stuff. I was cringing whilst reading it. Mental images are mean! well, I've never read a fiction like this before, so well done on the inventive. Well done on the gross factor. Insides were seriously squirming. XO

Really, your descriptive skills of dissection are in the lacking, I thought they still had kids dissect things in high school (I did a pig for standard bio, and a cat for advanced bio). There was an almost utter lack of descriptive detail, it just moved too quickly, there should have been little tidbits, onomatopoeias really would have helped if present more, and other senses should have been included, various smells, maybe liquid getting in the mouth for a taste aspect, I was expecting a lot more but was thoroughly disappointed with the lack of realism of the dissection process, and paralyzing the Pikachu, where's the fun in that?

Honestly, the nutritional information found on the side of every coke can is more disturbing then this fic could ever be sans a visual reference.

I give you a B+ for effort though.

Wow. This is actually pretty sad. I mean, you have such potential and yet squander it by bashing pokemon. Which really hasn't done anything to you. I've grown over hating you, and others like you. I just pity you and your bashing kind for being so sorry to hate something that never really existed.

You do have talent. I'll say that. But writing stuff like this just makes it a moot point.

btw, I am Hakutwo, and unlike you, it's seems I've matured over the time I've been here where-as you, have not. You can claim this as a flame or what not, but really, the only flamer here is yourself. And the only pitiful one is yourself. Because in the time it took you to write something out of spite and hate, you could have written something about something you like, or an original story.

~Renegade.

kill the pikachu! ha ha ha ha! uh... um... what? oh yeah, review. you spelled furry wrong, and didn't capitalize a sentence... i listen to mrs bauer too much.

Um..okay I'll try my very best not to throw up. >_>

It was...a sudden twist of event for Pokemon, considering me being an all star pokefan. It was gross to be saying, as well as a bit hateful to the pikachui...*cries*...but I suppose I might as well respect your interesting...ways indeed. o_o ALthough..>_>

*runs*

O_O um... wow lol story actually made my stomach turn hahaha im feeling kind of depresed so i needed to read something dark it helped in a way X_X anyway i dont personaly like the idea of riping a pokemon apart but besides that it was really nicley done good job ^^

one of the best stories i've read and it dosen't
suck like those ** ** who call themselfs authors

you are incorrigibly,demonically,and sadistically disgusting...

wow, this story was grotesque... how could anyone be so mean to a pokemon?? it chilled me to the bone. the story was very well done.

Omg when i saw this in your bio I thought it was something new. When I flamed you earlier I said:
The only person worse at writing is the person who disected a Pikachu... Thats you. Sry, Your right, I dream all the time about killing Pokemon. Your not an evil person, and it is ok to kill imaginary creatures. Your going to be in my story you liked as a cocky, attractive pokemon hating resistance fighter.Eh? Lol that'll ** you off but your not gunaa die, your a main character!

Nan, your persistence is admirable. I'm shocked ff.net keeps deleting this when there's not really anything wrong with it. It follows all their spooty guidelines (sorry, too much Angry Beavers)! And hey, remember, Death to Flamers! Well, good luck w/ your reviewers, I'm rootin for you! -Ozzy-
P.S. Two yorkies? How cute! Not my personal choice for dogs, but still, how cute!

Um, I won't flame or report you, but it might be a good idea to stop accepting anyonomous reviews. That way when someone flames you, you can flame them back! Oh yeah, these'll help against flamers. *Hands GirlWithTheHat Pokeballs containing Kyogre, Marshstomp, Feraligator, Blastoise, Relicanth etc.* Don't disect them please!