  Draknal 2006-03-02 . chapter 3Very interesting story. I've never read something like this before. Shinji actually making sure that the "kiss" went well? Wow. And now they need to save the world, again. ha ha. I really think you should update this again. It has great potential that you shouldn't just discard or leave to rot. Please consider making a new chapter. If you do then thank you and best of luck. I'll be watching! |
| OUBWIUBGPPPINSOJNONOICNFSOIN 2005-11-17 . chapter 3 All right! ShinjixAsuka! Whoop! Haha, into my C2 it goes!
Cheerio,
Naon |
| DCWestby 2005-08-26 . chapter 3 hm.. you should update this story... Really good plot to it. |
| .Symphony.In.The.Abyss. 2005-08-16 . chapter 3 nice but pls update! |
| lycanpoet 2004-12-07 . chapter 3 this is also a very good fic. Do keep it going. it would be a shame to waste it. |
| Angel trz 2004-10-01 . chapter 3 very enlightening and humorous i enjoyed it very much so... please update soon.
ok that was not like me so n e who UPDATE PLZ! |
| ss3dj 2004-09-25 . chapter 3 very nice story please update soon! |
| Lukie-kun 2004-09-15 . chapter 3 I'm kind of confused with Zef, the angel. I hope you give some more description of him but I'm guess that it'll remain a mystery for a while.
UPDATE soon! |
| Lukie-kun 2004-09-15 . chapter 1 Love love LOVE your story. I really like how you just cut to the chase and I just generally love any Asuka/Shinji fics. Going to review the next chappie. |
| Shinji-Higurashi 2004-09-07 . chapter 3 good story update soon i hope |
| Tashikawa 2004-09-06 . chapter 3 Dunno what to say...it is good with some confusing statements in it. So all in all, the story is mediocre containing good and bad parts together. The story is partially good while well written, that's about all I can say.
Though ignoring my earlier comments, I am keen on finding out what happens, so keep writing! |
| solo wing alpha 2004-08-29 . chapter 3 wow sort of funny but work on the humor other than that its pretty good |
| Jacho 2004-08-29 . chapter 3 its a nice story, please continue and dont stop in the middle and never continue like most stories do... |
| Xenostriker j.g 2004-08-28 . chapter 3 Not a bad fic. Though it could've used a bit more character development... but its nice to read!
I'm not sure about Zef though. For an angel he seems to be a bit out of place (in the EVA series). I mean if he's helping the Third Child wouldn't he be in trouble with the other angels (fallen or otherwise)?
Still I kinda like the way this story is going. |
| redemption2 2004-08-27 . chapter 3 Why *slap didn't *slap you *slap post *slap sooner, baka? I can't really give you a good evaluation of what I think without more. Keep it coming. |
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