Aww it's so sad. . .Luckily Tammy decided not to exicute Daine and Numair.

that was really sad. geez, how do you come up with such a depressing story?

I honestly thought it was a bit depressing, but you are obviously a talented writer. If you put your efforts into happier stories, you could go far. Also, explaining how they got into the situation might have helped.
I also think that you should write a sequal in, say, another lifetime. You know, when they are reborn and trying to get back to their time before execution, and trying to get revenge.
You don't have to listen to my suggestion for a sequal, but at least take in mind what i said about you writing happier stories. Please?

Hey, me again! Im glad I read this, this is a much better example of your talent (if you dont mind me saying so). Its also really sad *cries to sister for a tissue* It's well done and aI applaud you *claps*.

Ok you officially just made me cry. *tears running down cheeks* This is an awesome one time fic. It's so bittersweet! Great writing! I'm going to check out your other stuff now...
Saharian

*tears run down her eyes* thats so sweet..
could have done w/some extra space between paragraphs... and a little more detail, even if this is a one-shot...

OMG! This is so sad! I almost cried!

I must say this is written very well, despite the death theme. You have managed to convey a sense of sadness and loneliness, as well as Numair and Daine's desperate love for each other.
There is a Romeo/Juliet touch to this, and is overall, very touching.
Well done.

Aw, that was soo cute

I just reviewed your other story, can't remember the title. You are really into writing those annoying, good, yet, slightly depressing (no they really are good) plots. I compliment you on it, Its a challenge. My only suggestion is that you check formatting (I'm a fusspot).
If you have any spare time, check my first fic. Don't read When the Gods Intervene. I haven't updated for half a year, but its fun to read. (I just want a reason to blab on).

*WAH* So sad! I'm seriously crying *WAHH*

wow...just, wow...that was SO good! damn, i wish i'd of thought to do something like that! it was awesome, and like i said, an excellent idea...it was one of those things where you ask yourself 'why didnt i think of it'? the way you wrote it was great too...it was all around a very good little ficlet, tho sad too! ^_^

How sad!! *Sigh* I wish they didn't have to die, but then everyone does eventually. I like how they died in each other's arms. It was so romantic. Perhaps, you'll continue to write this. If you do, I hope to read it. Good job on this.

very sad, but very sweet.

oh that was sad, but really sweet.