  Tutenstein 2008-10-22 . chapter 11I love this fic. Its awesome. I know its been years since you updated but if you can, please do so! I want to know badly how this fic progresses. |
| pax-draconix 2008-09-22 . chapter 8 About the weapon question - remember that Picollo had him use a sword during his first training period in preperation for the coming of Nappa and Vegeta. Even though he wasn't trained in using one, per-se, he has experience doing so in a combat situuation. |
| pax-draconix 2008-09-22 . chapter 1 YOu mean they don't have the regen tanks here yet, considering Picollo asked Bulma to include copies of her newer inventions. Good story so far, a bit of mystery and suspense... til next time. |
| Pyros Aves 2008-07-16 . chapter 19 I have to admit the story is good so far, but it has been more than a month since you posted a new chapter. Of course, I'm hardly one to talk as it is the same with my own story. I look forward to reading the next chapter when it does get posted. |
| Airfoce2009 2008-05-07 . chapter 19 Hey I think this is a great story so far...although I really do wish you would UPDATE soon.
Laterz :) |
| DeltaKyuubi 2008-02-25 . chapter 19 cool story |
| Stalguy 2008-01-12 . chapter 16 If Gohan has a tail again shouldn't he transform into an oozaru the time the full moon came?, or it has not come a full moon yet? |
| HappyTreeFriend 2007-06-22 . chapter 18 For some reason, it thinks I reviewed chapter 19 already. I've been pretty busy for a while, so even though it's been about six months since you updated I just now got around to reading. That PsychoX guy obviously failed to do his job.
Still awesome, and I hope to see Gohan kick some ** soon. |
| ichi 2007-06-19 . chapter 19 please,hurry up with the next chapter |
| amac1688 2007-04-06 . chapter 19 i like it want more |
| Pubescent Teenage Boy 2007-03-21 . chapter 19 Continue this story or die. It's really that simple. Your life, being allowed to continue is contingent upon what you type in the next 2 weeks or so...
You have been warned. |
| DanielHimura 2007-02-22 . chapter 19 You know, we need a very good fight to spice things up a bit.
And kidnapping is just so overused. |
| Lucifer Leareth 2007-01-28 . chapter 19 GREAT JOB, BUT UPDATE! |
| Suuki-Aldrea 2007-01-27 . chapter 19 Cool! Update soon please! Ja ne! |
| SFBKludge 2007-01-26 . chapter 19 I read your story as well. I simply don't say much until I either spot a potential problem or a major plot point. (Not to mention that I only pop in the DBZ/SM XO thread every couple of weeks at best. Mostly looking to see if you've updated.)
I have enjoyed your story. Unlike many other XO's since your not fiddling around saying that the power levels are even remotely similar.
I simply don't say anything unless its constructive criticism or your plain knock my socks off with a chapter. |
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