  The Dark Overlord 2007-09-16 . chapter 2Good story. I need more before I can rate it though. However I advise you to make you chapters longer |
| Texan Ranger 2007-06-12 . chapter 2 I would say Luna Lobo is Remus Lupin. Think Luna mean moon and Lobo is wolf so its obvious, or so I think. |
| the demon alchemist 2006-05-17 . chapter 2 thius is a really enjoyable story pleas update soon |
| Erineon880 2005-12-08 . chapter 2 hello i am a new fan of your outstanding work i have been recommended to you by my personal friend silverlocke 980 please keep up the good work |
| fireflashphoenix 2005-06-20 . chapter 2 you need to update soon. although i don't belive the respect bit at all, i do like the whole damn thing.
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UPDATE...please |
| TheRavenShinigami 2005-04-12 . chapter 2 update |
| japanese-jew 2005-04-04 . chapter 1 completely unrealistic. *scolding* How do you respect someone if you lock them up in a cage? Call them a freak? Shut up. |
| android181 2005-03-20 . chapter 1 man update u need to it has been to long and ther ant that many evil harry stours and nun with him and fluer |
| android181 2005-03-07 . chapter 2 kool next chapter man u need to up date |
| WashedOut 2004-12-24 . chapter 2 That was wicked!
I hope you update soon... |
| angelofire 2004-10-17 . chapter 2 I really liked the story please update soon. |
| Occisor 2004-10-09 . chapter 1 hm |
| Egyptian Flame 2004-09-22 . chapter 2 nice, are u gonna continue it or not ? |
| linky2 2004-08-06 . chapter 2 nice story, write more. |
| linky2 2004-08-06 . chapter 1 chapter 1 |
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