Wow, I forgot about Future-Jack being the president-elect! I remembered the guys having to fight invisible Ashrak, though. Great story!

Another great story!

Loved it! Thanks for giving the marines the credit they deserve. There are more right?

And so we come full circle.

Jaffer is cute, and some of the other characters are fun, but I have a soft spot for Shawn.

President O'Neill - oh boy.

Brill, didn't know dogs could flirt. hehe

Loved this series.

I especially liked your future version of events.

Very enjoyable. Thanks for continuing the series.

Love this story.

Quote:

"Just a side note: I’m not sure if anyone noticed this, but I decided that I’d give the Marines on the base a bit more credit than Star trek gives their security people and make them actually play a bigger part in my story than just being used as cannon fodder (even though they did end up taking a lot of casualties, they also actually made a difference)"

Speaking as a former active duty US Marine... Thank you.

And as I read through the series, I'm really beginning to like a lot of the characters... and I want a dog like Jaffer!

Aww, I loved this! And Jack as President... uh-oh! xD You've got some amazing original characters, make for quite an enjoyable read. I think I have to love Jaffer the best, though, seeing as I have a three-year-old black lab myself. Jazz. Nowhere near as well-trained as Jaffer, but just as adorable. . Go Labs!

Is LOKI ON THE LOOSE AGAIN ? That dude is nothing but trouble!1

I thought you said in the first campers story that shawn &jack WERE NOT RELATED

.That is an evil twist LOL!1

INTERESTING ,can't wait to read the rest of the story!

Again... wow! I liked it a lot, and I look forward to the thousand other Campers! universe stories you've written.

I am working my way through the series again (3 time) and just realized as I was reading Scion, that your later stories featuring Ian, negate all that was written here. Ian is the one who ends up saving the Asgard, not Shawn and his extraordinary genes, and Ian isn't mentioned in Scion. So did the future mentioned in chp.43 become an alternate future? Kinda confusing. . .