"But it was a very strange kind of whole, involving chocolate Easter eggs, Quidditch talks, and awaking in chambers."

Beautiful.

I liked this so much, I even signed in to review it (so I could add it to my favorites). You should feel special- signing in takes a lot of time and energy, you know.
It was beautiful. Your prose is so poetic- it flows wonderfully, and everything just fits. It was also a really good thing that it fit with the canon, in that Harry's love for her came gradually and not all at once. (As many authors are prone to write.) And the mention of chocolate easter eggs. :)
Favorite line:
/And they’d fit together like broken shards of glass, as a window that had been smashed—broken pieces scattered on the floor—but then were meticulously interlocked back into a fractured unity./
Just incredible writing, and I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.

I like the beginning. It's poetic. Nice fic.

Very good, although it was short. =( 'Love these fics that just dwell on charcters feelings. You are very good at them.

first review! Ready go!
You never cease to amaze me