wow... that was a really amazing story. very touching. I really liked the part between Scott and Professor Xavier at the end.

I loved it. I thought this story was absolutely fantastic. I cried all throughout, especially during the final conversation between Scott and Xavier at the end. Beautiful. At first, I thought Chris was a bit of a cad, but...he really loves his son and, I guess that's all that matters.

I liked the fact that you threw Rachel in there, as well. There doesn't seem to be enough stories as moving as this one around here...maybe you should give us a sequel. Please? Pretty please? With sugar on top? All right, I'll shut up now...

Amazing, and maybe I'll check out some of your Evolution stuff now.

YES! another GREAT storyabout scott, jean and their wonderful daughter rachel. oh man, that was one of the nicest stories i ever read. ur the beest. woot!!~

What a moving story. I really loved how you wrote the moments between Scott and his father, Christopher; Not too overembellished with Scott's hate and hurt, and not too much begging from the father. As for the rest of the story, I liked the way it turned out.

Good one!
Sakura123

You really are a brilliant writer, can't wait to catch up on the rest of your stuff!

Beautiful story. *sniff*
And you brought in Rachel too :) *gives extra feedback choccies* Don't you just love the Summerses? ;)

Bravo! That was awesome!! I loved it!! Man, you are good!! I felt every emotion throughout the whole story!! I praise you!! Well, catcha later!! Bye!!
Dee

This is such a good story! Your a very good writer! Write more! I like reading your stories! ^_^

A very beautiful and well crafted story. I'm still wiping the tears rom my eye. Well done.