Wow, great story! I think you captured all Seven very well. Your Marshal wasn't very likable at first, but considering her experience as a female Marshal, her reactions seem quite realistic. Although she really was rude, especially to Ezra. Anyways, I like your writing and I'll be back to read some more of your Mag7 stuff!
That was so good! you are such a good writer! The marshal was a very complex character, at the beginning I was just like 'grrrr!' at her but nearer the ending I was less 'grrish' still thought she was a poop for being mean to Ezra but you got to understand her and stuff. You're really good at playing with your readers minds like that, one minute you like someone then you don't, that's actually quite a hard thing to do in my opinion. I really LOVED the interraction between Ezra and Inez, they are just so cute together! awwwwwww! anyway, loved the fic, so much action there was never a dull moment. yey you!
I hope i'm not the only one chanting *Sequel sequel sequel!* in my head right now. :P That was a wonderful story, YET AGAIN! I was a little disheartened when no one but Vin stood up for Ezra in the beginning after the Marshal's words, but in the end all was accounted for accordingly. LOL I hate stories where Ezra gets the shaft completely and in the end nothing evens out and he still has the short stick. This was quite different, and I'm glad!
Jennifer 1/18/01 . chapter 1
What a great story! Another classic by the amazing Tipper!
Don Seto 1/18/01 . chapter 1
Excellent! Seriously, this is one of the very best pieces I have ever read at ff.net, and great fun. I'll have to go look at some of your other work, huh? Hope it's as good as this!