 MEGAMANX411 2005-02-22 . chapter 2Well, I'm not really the biggest fan of Dragon Ball Z (anymore, I suppose, lol), but I like this fic regardless. Just one nitpick though..it could use some spacing to make it more readable. Other than that, I'm fine though. ^_^
Btw, I updated Mega Man Cross if you want to read more. ^_^ |
 Nicole 2004-09-23 . chapter 2 Hmm .. this is an awesome fic. I like it a lot :) I like the idea and the plot and they way you wrote Goku was super duper ;)
Anyways, you have an awesome writing talent, you write your stories good. Well, this is the first fic I read of yours, but I doubt it's the last. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!! |
 Bella~Rose01 2004-06-22 . chapter 1 Very Kawaii! I like this, it will be interesting to see where it's going... =)
Bella~Rose01 |
 Yuri Rikusentai 2004-06-20 . chapter 2IT SUCKS! ^_^U KIDDING! Actually, sis, this is awesome. The only thing is you need to maybe tell more of the others' facial expressions? ^_^U That got a little fuzzling... Anyhoo. WO! I'M THE FIRST REVIEWER! ^-^ I'm special! |
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