 TheHard 2009-01-06 . chapter 5Nice story! The fight was really lame, and I think that the story could have go without the fight, but, anyway... and, what about an "real" epilogue? hope is not much to ask :)
Nice story, I like the way you write, I think I'm going for your others stories now :) |
 Cloud Strife *loves his Aeris* 2008-08-21 . chapter 5 Hm... very good fic if I do say so myself. I also write fanfics and can tell a good one with great potiental. If you dont mind... I would like to make a sequel to this... I have some ideas for if and would like to put them to use. If you dont mind, send me your answer... e-mail me any time... it might be hard for me to answer though, Im not a big e-mailer. |
 SoloTalent 2006-06-06 . chapter 5Good Fanfic , plot and everything was ok and i dont think it was ooc :) |
 The Cow you chew 2006-06-04 . chapter 5 Love your fanfic |
 cokeboi 2006-05-25 . chapter 4excellent chapter, keep up the wonderful work.
shameless invite to everyone to join my blingo friends. ^^
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 cokeboi 2006-05-25 . chapter 3excellent chapter, keep up the wonderful work.
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 cokeboi 2006-05-25 . chapter 2great 1st chapter. i wonder what's gonna happen when everyone comes back. i hope i won't be disappointed.
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 Nysk 2006-04-01 . chapter 1Good story.
I enjoyed the interplay between Kasumi and Ranma.
Sad to have seen it end. Well off to read some of your other stories! |
 Bialaska 2006-03-02 . chapter 5Great story. A Kasumi/Ranma coupling is always great! :D I would have imagined Kasumi using pressure points, since I seem to remember her borrowing such books from Tofu, but otherwise it was awesome. |
 goku90504 2005-04-11 . chapter 5great fic |
 SSJ Guyver1 2005-03-08 . chapter 4haha,... great story there. Among the R+K fanfics I've read this month, it comes second to Aijou & Aitou - Love & Regret.
Keep up the good work, and may Belldandy bless your writing once more, if it comes even remotely as good as this one. |
 Bobboky 2005-03-03 . chapter 5decent work done here |
 Drkjester 2005-01-06 . chapter 2I read this over at cork first time. Loved it and hope to see more. |
 Michael The-Zorch Haney 2004-11-30 . chapter 5Pretty good story. I love Ranma+Kasumi fics. I'm writing a few myself. This one was pretty good thought it suffers a little from "Akane Is An Obsessively Spoiled Brat" Syndrome.
Anyway, besides that little issue the story was great. Too often fan fics don't delve deeply enough into the heart of the real Saotome Ranma. The Ranma who can't stand to see people suffer. Also, too many fan fics protray Ranma as a perpetual kid who never grows up and never develops as a character (Ahem, members of FanFiction Mailing List or FFML, ahem). Like in the manga Ranma and Akane are dynamic characters who do grow and change as time goes by. I'd like to see maybe a sequel to this to get the reactions of the other fiances. That's bound to be a load of fun. |
 Bluedragon81 2004-10-27 . chapter 4What can I say here; Gomen, I should have gotten this review done much sooner.
For starters this is a marvelous story; Well thought out and written. I did not see any glaring Spelling or Grammar mistakes (as if I should be the one to talk about that!!) The story is short but not rushed by any means and I personally did not see any glairing problems with what people call Ranma½ canon. It would be nice to see it continued, where life goes from here.
Anyway Great job and keep up the good work. |