hey what happened? its been almost 1 1/2 years since a new chapter was put on here. just thought i would say that...good story though

wow!i laughed so much!
pleease continue this story!i'd love to see it:)

*laughs like a maniac*
And then, you see this? This right here?” Erk said, lifting up his shirt (WHEE!), to Lucius’ alarm, to point angrily at a large bruise on his mid-region. “Some enemy bas-“

“Watch your language!” Lucius interrupted. “You’re in the presence of a holy man!”

“-ilisk punched me! And then he turned out to be Lady Priscilla’s brother!” Erk exclaimed, gesticulating enthusiastically to somehow add to his point.
Basilisk! that was from HP!!
oh yeah, and the Guy thing...yeah. i learn french, and i came across the name. but wasn't Guy's hair green and not black?

HAHAHAHA!enjoyed the sarcasm and RDOO!!
"like a hurricane through Florida." i misread "florida" as "florina", and hurricane=Legault...

HAHAHAHA! i laughed so much...last time i did was reading Serra's Ways...
Nice thing about Wrath...add an i and you get Wraith...and that's what Hector called Matt...
haha...Matt acted like a four year old...:)
i'm an Erk AND Matt fan. yay!

This is so funny!! I love the RDOO moment during the arena fight!!

WoW this is great. Everything is so deteailed it's almost like if we were playing the game. The support and the things they say. It's Great.

ErkxSerra is the best!

And everything is so funy too.

Great job!

actually, canas is from ilia.

HURY UP AN RITANOTHER ONE THINK OF ALL THE PEOPLE U R DISAPOINTING unless u r
A-dead
B-dying,or
C-eaten by a radioactive hamburger that wus born from a cow/lemon and raised by a topato( a male potato and a female tomato)THEN I C NO REASON FOR U TO HAVE SLAKED OFF
PLZPLZPLZ THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME i will send a mob after u if u dont(not in a bad way,really)!

ive waited fer a year wen r u gona write another one?!

ok srry just had ta let that out
um yah im just a random guy who HAPPENED to find this site then HAPPENED to not give a review until now
well this wus fun
great writing i wish i cud write like dis and i refuse to believe erk is fictional

Rock on! Heh. I feel that Erk is getting what he deserves... He's a really cool character and all, but he should have more...enthusiasm about him, right? I mean, he gets to hang around Serra! (I'm saying this from the game, not bashing your story, I love it!!)

Thanks for giving me something to laugh with on my weekend of flu bug! I owe you one!

ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!How dare she call u fictional!
gah!
u dont deserve this!befree!free!arianna!how could u u evil-!

That's my evil side.
my better side:
ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!Fight the urge for serra! fight it ! talk 2 me! ill kill myself if only u talk!
plz!plz!plz!ERK!ERK!ERK!fight it! im with u!gah!reply!reply!erk!aright, i have a knife. make sure my sis gets it so she can get it to me in heaven!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!

ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!How dare she call u fictional!
gah!
u dont deserve this!befree!free!arianna!how could u u evil-!

That's my evil side.
my better side:
ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!Fight the urge for serra! fight it ! talk 2 me! ill kill myself if only u talk!
plz!plz!plz!ERK!ERK!ERK!fight it! im with u!gah!reply!reply!erk!aright, i have a knife. make sure my sis gets it so she can get it to me in heaven!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!ERK!

Snffle... Why haven't you updated?? It's so lonely without the happy story... sniffle