loved it :)

very cute. and i think that you really have the characters down well. five stars, just love the idea. all in all great fic!

That was really cute!

Good job.

I just finished the dvd of Wonderfalls. Liked it so much I came over to FF. Yours was the earliest and first story. It’s okay. Too short to get the convoluted nature of the show. The Muse’s directions are solid directions only when action is required immediately (spit out your gum) and ambiguous when seen as a theme (Let him go). Script should be weirder, funnier and longer. I hope this is constructive. It’s not meant to be mean.

good plot.

Wow!This was so good, and very in character...

I love Wonderfalls, I love Jaye and Eric, egro I love this.

I still cannot understand how they could cancel such a great show.

Anywa, kudos!

Hope to read more from you in this fandom!

OMG that was so good was it actuly a epasode for the second season but never got made because it was canceled and you just put it on here...but if you dident it was realy good and every thing was perfect and you rock!

This. Is. Great. Best Wonderfalls fanfic I've found yet. I know, it's a year old, but isn't it better to review late than never? *grin*

Haha! I loved this! This has to be the best WF fanfic I've read! Keep up the good work.

Nice. Charming, simple and to the point. Good flow, not too complex. If I were Eric I would've been a little more analytical regarding Jaye wielding a shank. Area or Aspects for improvments? None this is ok

omg that was great! I'm watching the show on the dvd and i can't believe they canceled it! evil tv people! lol great fic btw. it really sounds like something that would happen on the show. me like! *adds to faves list*

I relish any and all opportunities to see Eric and Jaye together. Even in the series finale, all we got was a kiss. Rat b*ds to not put them together and then cancell the show. One of these days I'll be rich and I'll buy the rights to the show and bring it back to life just to get those two crazy (in Jaye's case, quite possibly literally) kids back together. Loved it.

Hey, this is cute, i hope you finish it somtime!

YAY! more Wonderfalls fics... and pretty good too. :)

that was great. I thoroughly enjoyed it.