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goldenspringtime 10/7/11 . chapter 7
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one
goldenspringtime 10/7/11 . chapter 6
What destiny did was noble and heart breakingly sad. Great story love it!
Time and Fate 7/21/06 . chapter 7
well, im wondering very much wat is going to happen
fallen angel 6/23/06 . chapter 7
DAMN ur good!

i really really like...LUV it so update asap...i can't get enough of this!
chalania 6/2/06 . chapter 7
Oh come on...this is unfair! I finally get to a story I enjoy, and it leaves me hanging! Please try to write a little more... pretty please? :)
crazy4horses 3/3/05 . chapter 7
O_O chattypandagurl left us hanging! What am I going to do? Wait? Nah that's not an option! _
Kernl Autobahn Sandrz 2/27/05 . chapter 7
So much suspense! Very good chapter, plus it was nice and long...But now I must wait for another chapter...please UPDATE SOON!

*disappears mysteriously*
Kernl Autobahn Sandrz 1/31/05 . chapter 6
Nice long chapter...and intense! Definitely makes me want to read more. Update soon!

*disappears mysteriously*
TheDreamerLady 1/29/05 . chapter 6
...thanks.. yeah, great chapter... YOU KILLED MY 3RD FAVORITE CHARACTER... NO... evil you are... *is sad* this sucks... well at least the mistry man didnt' get anything... *blinks* is he a cannon character, or did you make him up? Cuz if he's cannon i think I know who it is...

you know, I kinda like yer version of scott... he seems cooler, ya know? lol, I don't know why either... you just make him really awesome... I thought the vision was really awesome, and I think you have Destiny down as a character... *sigh* now she's dead... poor mystique... think of how she's gonna feel... you just killed off her lover... dude...

I really liked the chapter and I just have one request... UPDATE FASTER!

lol, update soon!

amanda and Lanco(the duck)
crazy4horses 1/2/05 . chapter 5
W00t...Scott's the bomb! lol no one says that anymore but I don't care _

Update soon!
highlitergrl 1/1/05 . chapter 5
huh? He blasted her into a wall? but that...woudl hurt her, right? AAHH! this story is really good! write more soon!
Pyrotic 12/28/04 . chapter 5
Nononono! The chapter can't end THERE! Updateupdate! I wanna know what hapens! *pout* Well, anyway, it was a very good chapter, a bit confusing at first. But I figured it out by the end. Now UPDATE! WE need to know what happens next!

-Pyrotic

'Any word can be dirty if you try hard enough'
Kernl Autobahn Sandrz 12/22/04 . chapter 2
Ok, I'm just sending this review to say that the quote from the last review is from Dodgeball...yeah, I just wasted review space...apologies to you...you were probably looking forward to a great review...well...update soon, I guess...

*disappears mysteriously*
Kernl Autobahn Sandrz 12/22/04 . chapter 5
Whoa! What was that about? Scott just confused me pretty good...there had better be an explanation in the next chapter...Anyway, it was a good chapter, always the suspense...but I'll survive. Update soon!

*disappears mysteriously*

PETER: You know, alliterations aside, I think I'm going to go ahead with the tournement.

WHITE: Yeah, you ARE going to go ahead with the tournement!

PETER: That's what I just said.

WHITE: I know that's what you JUST SAID!

PETER: Ok, I'm not sure where you're going with this.

WHITE: Well, I'm not sure where YOU'RE going with this.

PETER: That's what i said.

WHITE: That's what I'm saying to YOU!

PETER: ...Alright...

WHITE: Touche
Obiwanfan 12/18/04 . chapter 5
i'm slightly confused... but i'm sure i'll figure it out. great chapter and i can't wait for the next one. Good job.
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