Wow, definitely a fav! I'm impressed with the fact that this simply structured, short fic covered so much subtlety about the relationship development between Ren and Lyserg. I really like it! No out of characters, no overly angsty or sap, just a very well done Ren pov one shot! Thanks for sharing!

Ren x Lyserg is indeed the best. >.< I love Lyserg's cuteness in this!

Kind of sweet and kind of not all at the same time.

My favorite line was when Ren talked about Yoh shattering all his illusions, i'm not sure why.

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Aw, this is so cute. It's a well written one-shot, IMO. I can't write a one-shot period, It always begins to branch off and I HAVE to tie up loose ends somewhere and that's where it turns from a one shot to a who-knows-how-many chaptered story.

That was sweet. Made me wish there was more. Good use of imagery, and very in-character. I had a clear visual image of the last scene--nicely done. :)

GYAH! How sweet! How cute! Yes it's Ren/Lyserg! This is great! ^.^

I like this. ^_^ Ren's character was very well written. Lyserg was a little more enthusiastic than he was during the tournament, but that's fine. I liked when the two finally had a moment together and were holding hands. Good work. ^_^

oh that's so cute ^_^

i like your fic

oh that so sweet, this is the first ren/lyseg one i ever read keep it up!