That was a nice telling of a momentt when Yusuke and Keiko were kids. I like that you had Keiko's parents act like parents to Yusuke as well, seein as how in the show they were shown to like him. I think one thing that would have made it better would be Yusuke and Keiko getting into a fight and Yusuke ask Keiko to marry him (since her father said Yusuuke used to do that when they were younger), but it's still good.

Not bad at all

Aw... so cute _ Very original plot and good job with the ending.

I liked it quite a lot. The characterization was spot-on and very enjoyable, and the story itself flowed smoothly and just plain *worked*. Thank you.

Wow. This is so good...

Good Job. that's all I can think of right now. :]

aww...that was such a sweet story

i really loved the flashback!

please write more y/k!

Aww, that's sweet. I love flashbacks. Everyone was so IC, and you really worked the pity angle well. Great work!

i like it, seems like that really would proably describe his childhood

wow, this was... awesome. Very thoughtful. The childhood events sound are very possible and accurate, I should say.

A job well done. Especially on the flashbacks. Very creative and original.

Aww! Chibi Yusuke & Keiko. I small glimpse into early Yusake's life is always nice.

This was really good. I loved the detail you put into Yusuke's past. I can see Atsuko treating him like that. It's so sad, but it's what made him into the tough guy he was. Great job. I really enjoyed it.

WOOT! GREAT STORY!

Awesome story and just think Yusuke does grow up to be a spirit detective add more real soon. Thanks Jessica