:( Oh my, Sara is dying.. That's so sad.. She was so young and full of fire.
But, :] the new wielder is coming up, ey? Woot Woot!
Please, I'd really like to read more :]]

More? Yes?

You weren't joking when you said 'redone'. I think I like this beginning better, sane sad Sara dying of cancer rather than crazy ** Sara killing herself. Charlene, huh? Is she like Nat, or like the rets of the story, completely different? I hope she has a few similarities, I liked Nat for the most part. Is there an Ian clone? So many questions!! Please continue soon! :D BTW, love the new name.

Cheers,
How sad and poignant. Sara is accepting her fate w/ dignity along with Ian at her side. So many things/wants but so little time! It's true- when one is down & out; that's when your REAL friends & support system shows up. I'm happy that Sara won't be alone, but saddened that Ian soon will. Your revamp is off to a great start!!
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Interesting start.
I'll be waiting to see where you go with this.