Funny the last 5 fan fics I've read recently on KP have all in volved rufus dieing D:

interesting story, i don't know what to say

Those pregnancies came out of left field to me. I sure didn't expect Shego to be carrying Ron's kid. I had thought, briefly, that it was going to be Kim giving birth to her and Ron's child. Well, a girl can hope right?

Liked it. Could've used a little humor, but it was still a good depiction of mourning.

It's better to understand when it's all in one chapter. It's good, all of your work is good.
*Jewelie*

Yes it is long. what was once 2 chapters is now just 1. i added a bit more background and took out some unnecessary duplication. i think it flows alot better now. It sets up the 'Legacy' sequel I'm working on too. i should be getting chapter 4 up for it this weekend, 5 day weekend from work.