Ah, poor Maglor my second favorite Silmarillion character. This is beautifully and cleverly done, hat's off.

Your story..it blows me away. Keep up the good work!

Hi! I'm the same one who recently sent you a message about this story from Open Scrolls. Just wanted to let you know that I'm recommending it on the Brothers of Gondor message board today! ()

--Rose (Cressida on the board)

This is a truly wonderful story. I absolutely LOVE how you blended the Silmarillion with TA Middle-Earth. Many thanks indeed for showing Maglor! I loved his characterization, not to mention showing the closeness between Boromir and Faramir. And I love how the roles have been reversed in a way that doesn’t really happen in fanfic; it’s Boromir who’s a bit out of sorts, if not a bit scared and in need of comfort while of course Faramir keeps it together.
Funny, its never occured to me about the omens, but it is true (of course I had to check the Encyclopedia of Arda to refresh my memory). Anyway, great

y ou know what...your omens are scary...considering i just finished the odessey, and that's chock full of omens, and we all know how that ends...with lots of death...
anyway...very well written, and i hope to see more work like this in the soon to be future

A unique and fascinating encounter between the young Brothers Mir and an elf out of earlier ages. I love the characterization of the boys. Faramir's piping up with the mention of their descent from the line of Numenor was priceless, and very credible!
I did not understand Maglor's reference to two legs versus four when he spoke of Denethor.