i'm not very good with words when it comes to reviews.
but this fic is about choices, and how we shouldnt make some choices unnecessarily final.

i'm glad you gave goku an "out".

aww. Sweet and yet sad. Loved IT!

I really like this one too!! Its adorable!

Very good. You are an excellent author. I applaud you and add you to my favorite authors list! ^^

so cute!

oh wow. that was so sweet, towards the end. but is it the end?

Aw... how cute! -^_^- I'm not a huge fan of Sazo/Goku (All hail Gojyo/Hakkai!!), but this fic was rather informing (can't think of a better word...). Goku learning how to cook! I never would have thought, and neither would most other people. Can't wait to read part 2!

I've heard about this fic from the SxG mailing list. I applaud you. This was terrific. The style was clean and interesting, the characterization was perfect, and even the situation was realistic. I give you a 9.5, which will raise to 10 if you continue writing these great Saiyuki fics (wink).

nice story..well done~

Aw... very sweet! Nicely written, and I really enjoyed their characterizations. I like it!

aw...this is soo touching...great job!

...That's pretty darn sweet. Not a bad style, too--simple, clean and efficient. Paragraphing's good too. Nice first Saiyuki fic!