Wow. Amazing. Pure genius. You kept them very well in character, yet it still had all the elements of 'love' and such. Very well, written.

Beautiful.

aw that was so good! well done m8 really good fic.

Maybe it's just me, but this story was a bit confusing. I didn't really understand what was going on at first and you seemed to just throw Sands and El together. You didn't even really explain why they started sleeping together, it just happened, which was a little sloppy.

But I have to admit that it pulled together in the end. After awhile, I got the fact that this was just some sort of metaphor for how Sands and El's relationship is going to be like from then on: random and constantly moving. All in all it was a pretty good story, but there are a few bumps that need to be ironed out.

**, that was so sweet. I mean, in between the two of them ** at each other, it was really an adorable slash fic. Loved it, 'specially "boobookitty**." Way to shove two great movies together. Great work!
-Elle

So, so, so much love for this. There are no words.

i really really liked it!!
you're a wonderful writer! ^_^

This is really andtruly superb. You're writing style is excellent. Also, the characterization was very well done.

fantastic, amazing. this is a great story - are you going to carry it on? it finished so nicely, and yet of course i'm getting the sort of wanting-more feeling that i only get with the best fics.
i love the little Sand's endearments; completely in character and very funny. and i think you've pinned the El-Sands relationship right to the corkboard - which is something that is very hard to do. So well done! and thank you for a great fic.

Hey there! Your story was truely awesome! There was plenty of detail and was well writen. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

I read this somewhere before, a yahoo group list maybe. Anyway, it's really very nice. Great job!