Well that fits well. You've just made Captain Jack Sparrow a HUMAN. In the movie he seems a bit too ... well, Sparrow-like. Captain, of course, how could I forget... but - so care-fee and ever-happy? I honestly hope that in the sequels we'll see his human-side, too.

dude, totally awesome, i like the wya you drew the story out more than they do in the movie. but is till think that the hat is so gosh darn bloody ugly, anyway i like it alot
finish the cliff hangers love, please

OH DEAR GOODNESS! This brought freaking tears to my eyes! *shrieks* You are bloody fantastic. I'm going to read your other work now, because you are bloody fantastic, and have I said that you totally freaking rock!??!?!?!?!?!? GREAT IDEA!
And when the wind hits my sails... I'm GONE, LUV!
~Bonnie Pirate Lass~

I really liked this 'fic. It was an excellent take on what might have been going through his mind at his hanging. However, I don't think it's Iron Maiden that does this song but another group called Cradle of Filth. Either that or Cradle of Filth did a cover of it.

this is really good! keep up the great work savvy? *hugs*
*~Leila~*

um, let's see how i can describe this...excellent coolness! i don't usually read sonfics, cuz a lot of times they're tedious and dumb as hell, but this one was good. the song was absolutely perfect; i've never listened to Iron Maiden, but it looks like i'll have to if they've got such interesting lyrics. also, i'll have to look for more of your fics, cuz i like your style. oh, and sorry you had to rewrite, but the fic turned out great, so don't feel too bad!

I like this piece. I think adding in those lyrics makes this a really powerful story. Do more like this.

yay... i'm reviewing. Well, I told you it was wonderful the first time I read it *strains to think* a long time ago. It's worth saying again though, that it is brilliant. The connection is amazing. *thumbs up* i'm out. ttyl lyl

Wow,amazing.Such emotions you displayed,I love it.You have a gift with words my friends,don't let it go to waste.

I loved this fic! too bad it was only a shot. I don't really like them, because they're so short, but maybe I'm, just jealous, because I can't write so short. Oh, well. R&R mine, please.
Yours Sincerely,
Sherlock's Sparrow

Wow, that's really really really really good, I can't wait for more!
~a'marie