I like this story, but i was wondering why Vivianna has the same chapter up and the same title? are you guys collaborating or what?

This sounds really interesting, hope you'll continue soon!

Odd, but could be going places.

Oh my god... This was too good! The writing was excellent and I cannot WAIT until chapter two... Do you know how rare it is for me, to actually be really, really excited and expectant by the end of the page? This is a really good story. WRITE THE SECOND CHAPTER! Woo!

Wow, I HAVE to see the rest of this (if you continue of course.) I LOVE your stuff, and I really want to know what happens next. BTW, was Sarah actually a Witch in Labrynth? It's been years since I've seen that movie.
Anyhow, this is cool:D Please update!
And, yes, I know what theater students are like (being a Thespian myself.)