Hey nice story i like how you made Hinata seem a lot more confident good job and i look forward to reading your sequel if there is on

i want a sequel because i think it would make a great story about how naruto would try to date hinata. maybe hinatas dad doesnt aprove so the story would show how they dated and stuff

Your story sounds preety good. I like what you dd with the guys but the song was a bit terrible. Other than that, everything was fine. Maybe you should have one of the girls end up loving another guy? That would make a lot more drama.

I love your story! It seems like a perfect episodeto be put on the telivision show! You should DEFINENTLY write a sequel to this

Hanabi not Hanubi

who the hell is Kanubi.

That was a good story. I think there should be a sequel. I mean it was good but so good that people wanna find out what happens next.

OMG! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT THEY'RE GONNA DO!
by the way, nice job so far. i'm just not a fan of the Lee and TenTen couple, and not too crazy about the Ino and Shika couple.
But it is still great so far

i enjoy reading it. keep going!!~~ :D

You should make a sequel that has Naruto confront (encounter might be a better word, I dunno...) Hinata's father.

That was the funniest thing ever! Make an epilouge! Yay!!

FACK STOP (COMMENTING) ABOUT EVERY LITO THING IT FACKING KILLED IT 4 ME! But besides that it was pretty cute! gj ^.^

it could be a bit longer

i really only read this fic cause i wanna read the sequel so yeah it was ok i guess but the master iruka thing...yeah

Kanubi? isn't it hanabi?