wow that was amazing. it was extremely well written and the storyline was individual and new. i loved it.
Love Scarred Princess

Too much of slaping and so, it’s a pity that you are making an “hero” of Hermione, and not complex characters because your writing is quite good and I truly was inpresed with the history so far I almost drop it this chp. It’s good that’s why I bother telling you this; your descriptions are quite deep and with a lot of atmosphere, some times dark and very good. I will keep reading!

A good fanfic! And I guess I'm still very much into fluff if fluff endings make me this happy. Liked this one [although I love DCBD way wayy more!].

Are there any other fanfics you're writing that's not posted in your ff profile?

cute dmgh fic!

i loved it!

AWW! that was a cute ending. your writing got so much better as u went along in the story, it was an amazing transformation to read. good story.

OMG! dudley's groupies called him "Big D" and blaise calls draco D. hehehehehehe. :)

there's ALWAYS 10 new members to each house; 5 girls and 5 boys.

WTF? ginny's full name is ginerva, not virginia. and its really annoying when you introduce people at the begging of the chapter with thier middle names. Seriously, you don't need to do that.

Yay for Dramione! Make up(out) right at the end.

But was Substitute for Love removed or what? Sounds interesting. I'll read your other story then.

Never thought evil Lucius would help Draco now.

Yay, Draco and Ron are, um, acquainted now. :) Ron can always tell his stories...

Azkaban? damn right! And you know Dumblydore would grant them lotsa points, especially if Gryffindor was involved, hehe.

I like how they fight though, otherwise it would be too cliche. Nicely put.

Yeah, why would Xander use that idiot ** Pansy anyway? He should've known that all she wants is Draco, so she couldn't stand to have him killed. And she can't kill Hermione because Xander wants to enjoy her or whatnot. This wasn't as well planned out as Xander though, hm?

...so the mysterious man from before was an Egyptian thief?

Xander won't make his move, will he? Ah, I'm scared!

Creepy little stalkers!

This is the dumb Harry we all know who can't even figure out who this boy is, eh?