Good one, although they are not straight they are both in character.
Very good writing.

Muh ha ha! I love this pairing!

Umm, so, I don’t really get why the reviews are about ten chapters ^^; Did you edit the fic to make it a one-shot? Or is there another fic somewhere that I missed? Anyway, that was nice. Totally different from A Crowd, because here the pace is fast and catchy. Interaction between the two is cute, because of all the little remarks they say to each other. And of course, back-stabbing :D (yeah it’s cute, sh. It’s cute back-stabbing because it ends in fluff.)

*Scratches head* I don't get how the first chapter links with the rest. Was the first chapter a preview of the future and you're going back to when they first met? Or is it the other way around? I'm confused.

I'll also like to say I like the idea of young M16 Alex VS young Criminal Mastermind Artemis better. The very first chapter seems to be better then the rest. So if you're having plot problems, I'll say this: Artemis probably can't resist making an opportunity while he's 'babysitting' an actress, he'll arrange some more illegal activities to gain more money. Then M16 will soon becomes aware of a criminal mastermind but could not figure out who it is, so they tell Alex to do an investigation whenever he could. Alex then begans to suspect his new friend (and lover), and the two engage in a battle of wits with plenty of sexual tension thrown in.

That's just a suggestion, you probably have other plans, I just hope you'll update!

you're stories are just so brilliant! love them love them love them. EXCELLENTE!

chao
niobe

p.s. for self - left off reading here resume at a further date. over.

okay... why did he tell him?

So are you giving up?

Can you send if a synopsis of future events if you are going to discontinue the fic. Shame if you ended it like this. A nice story it was.

Thank you for tyhe read. I enjoyed it.

Highly strung? (grins)

Amusing. That's why I kept clicking to find out more...

Now that picture of Artemis forgetting and it pains him so. That is magnificent. (claps)
Don't expect too much compliments...

That was sweet? Hmm...not really, but it does border to it. More like assumptious.
It is longer. I like their way they are screwed up by the way. It's them and I accept that. I won't have it any other way.

Short and fast pace...I prefer the one before...at least it's just short. Wait, it was also uneventful...err, I'll just piece both...(silently does so in the head)...Okay. Now it is longer...fast paced and uneventful...(chuckles) But longer.

Short. Too short an uneventful for my taste. I'll just proceed to read more.

Someone sounds like they woke up at the wrong side of the bed this morning. (chuckles) Don't worry, you won't receive any crappy reviews to dictate everything...It's your fantasy and ideas...so go with it.
If people flamed you, just tell them to screw off.

aww they make a cute couple 4 2 ppl from different books

! spaz

musst...more...

your characterisation is very accurate, and you have very few mechanical errors. (for which i adore you.) i am really quite enjoying myself so far...i have, unfortunately, no "plot ideas", therefore cannot aid you in moving this along, but the sooner the better :D (the eternal chant of those who have found amazing, unfinished fics)

taylor