Did Marty die when his car rolled into the lake? I hope not.

with all due respect,

Phish Tacko

Nice cliffhanger! I LOVE this story! Too bad I have to get ready for school now, so I can't read the rest! DARN IT! XD It's actually kinda funny; this situation. XD

Pretty good: keep writing bigger and better.

You are especially good at taking advice: if only princeserenity30 would take advice some time. I've stopped bothering to try to read hers. But this is a review of your story, so, in closing, I will say that it is great!

Hover and out

EternalDensity

(love that line)

p.s. I'm writing a story of sorts. See http:/forums.valorin.net/index.php?showforum1

Thanks - It's my first fan fiction that I've finished. I'm hoping to become a better writer through fan fiction - and my main problem is plot confusion. Maybe I should just stick to nice simple stories. Time travel stuff is too confusing - even for me!

So, originally, Marty almosted died pursuing Needles and Jim, but he didn't, just almost. As a result of his intervention, they were caught and jailed, then years later they murdered him for putting them there? And by taking this insane detour to the past, they stopped that from happening? Uh... that's good... I suppose.

Well, in a sense you're right, but there are two possibilities:
1. The ripple effect hasn't caught up with them
2. Egland may have changed in some ways but Hill Valley still could be the same.

Not to nitpick, but doesn't the fact that the future is just like it used to be mean that Needles and Jim could be left in the past without any negative consequences? P Anyway, good writing, I can't wait for the next one, and this freeze-clay intrigues me.

Wow, that was Unlikely :P Needles actually used his brain, I can't wait for the next part, something tells me it's gonna be a doozy.

OK, I made this chapter a bit longer. I know it's not as long as most stories are, but that's why I'm making a chapter. I prefer to update faster, rather than later. But that way I don't write as much. Sorry, it's just my style. ;)

Yes, I would like to make the chapters longer, but that means I won't get them out faster. Is that OK with everyone? Well, I hope it is. Prepare for the chapters to be twice or thrice as long.

Wow... wonder what Needles'll do now? Great writing, but I'd try to make the chapters a little longer.

Thanks for the reviews everyone! I will do that thing with the spacing with the talking. Thanks again, wow, it's my first story here and a lota people like it! Thanks again! I'm not sure when Chapter 9 will be up, but I'll probably upload 9 and 10 at the same time, so everyone's in for a treat! -Hover and Out, HBK!

Hey HBKid! This is Erased From Existence from the messageboard. I'm really enjoying this story - keep up the good work!
Just one note - when you write anything that is spoken, when a different character talks you should start a new line or paragraph so that the reader knows a different character is talking. This is just me being picky, but I thought it might help! See ya!;)

hello this is Jennifer Jane mcfly from the bttf forms i realy love your story were is jennifer? lol she is my favorite charecter maybe you should have one of the thiefs kidnap her and hold her for ransom just an ide oh read my fanfics her martys new life and outta time enjoy please update soon!
Jennifer Jane Mcfly was here

Wow, cool, can't wait for the next one, little confused as to why Doc didn't say "I know more than you because it's my machine." or something though.