aww,that is cute.

[applause]

A few typos, but reading aloud helps you find those.

I like your topic, how you approached it, and your writing style. I've only seen two season 2 episodes & read transcripts of all season 1 & most of season 2. Therefore, this is very realistic based on what I've seen/read of Andromeda, despite a few things I've picked up about later seasons.

You actually know grammar! Yay!

This is definitely better writing than most on this site. You proofread, don't you? :)

Keep writing!

wow!
this story is so good
the best one on Andromeda yet
glad i found it
...don't stop writing
you have a really good talent

A worthy ending to such a tale.

I liked your story. It seems such a poetic ending for Dylan's quest.

The ending was a little abrupt but over all I really enjoyed it.

Sniff. This is sad but, good. It's nice that Dylan wins out in the end and restores the Commonwealth. I like to see the good guys win.

hey this is a great story, I have imagined just what would happen. I enjoyed your writing very much.

Charon...that's a star or something huh? I liked that. It was a nice way to tie everything up.

AWESOME!

*sniff* *sob*

This was excellent! So sad, so sweet, SO GOOD!

very touching but quite sad, I dont know that I like the idea of all the others dying but neverminding that, it is very well written and very believable believable.

This story was so sweet! I'm kinda intrigued as to how exactly Trance and Harper died. But I LOVE the story! I'm a huge fan of a Dylan-Rommie relationship, and the subtlety and warmth with which they finally share their feelings is so sweet - and I can picture it happening. Great story, and keep up the awesome work!

A beautiful story.

Sweet ...appropriate...sad...

Good work, not too saccharin...