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| DragonJivi 2005-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI likey! Awesomely funny. *two thumbs up... perhaps three and a half...* |
| Glorious Clio 2005-12-22 ch 1,  | abuseI loved it! I read a stream of Consciousness book, and your example was so much better. So much for American Literature. I love Newkirk! Midget |
| Scotty McSpockirk 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was SO hilarious! So many funny lines...heehee! "I *know* your name's not Johnny!" That was funy and so was: "Where does he think I'll go?" Man... Oh well, I have to be off, I want to get a beer. ~ILHH~ |
| Kathy F 2004-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI loved the stream of thought style. You have a gifted ear for dialogue and understanding characters. My very favorite line has to be "I knoew you're name's not Johnny..." |
| AGroovie1 2004-04-17 ch 1, | abuseZoey - Very good! The Stream of consciousness gave it a very fun feel. And I didn't even get to finish it!! Oh, mum. HELP! :-) |
| Kits 2004-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this. It was cute, short, wonderfully amusing, and so in character with Newkirk and Carter. I could hear them both talking in my head just like it was really happening--and you happened to do it with two of me favorite characters too. *Beamz* Loverly! I'll admit it, my favorite parts are the: "Oh, mum. HELP!! HELP!!" and... 'Don't move,' he says. Where the bloody hell does he think I'll go?? and finally, What?? I *know* your name's not Johnny--NEVER MIND, Carter! Classic. Kits (who is still chuckling) |
| marylinusca 2004-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat is Newkirk to an 'N' - and Carter too, to the rescue just in time. Beautiful Carter/Newkirk one shot, but then, I never doubted that it would be. |
| bumblebuzz 2004-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseFantastic story! HA HA! I loved it. I really liked the stream-of-consciousness approach, and it was perfect Newkirk. Clever idea, and what a fun way to end it. Really a delight. |
| longtallsally 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseIT WAS PRETTY GOOD. RATHER AMUSING. |
| carterfan 2004-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseFantastic! Very well done. You're one of my favorite HH writers & I agree with the other reviewer who said that "Fateful Laughter" was wonderful! That's probably the HH story I've read over & over the most! |
| ML Miller Breedlove 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you got into Newkirks head. Writing a one sided conversation is not easy. Plus filling in all the background information. Bravo! |
| marg 2004-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice Zoey. You got Newkirk perfectly. I could easily see the whole scenario. |
| Kathy M. 2004-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseZoey, you need to do "stream of consciousness" more often--absolutely brilliant! I loved your "Britishisms"--Newkirk sounded so much like himself. Very witty, very clever story--thank you! |
| fanes 2004-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw *cry* thank's a lot for this! well I like "Hogan's Heroes" verry much!! and of course your stories! maybe you want to know that I'm from Austria, you know the land in the south of Germany! And from where are you? well, thanks a lot for your chapter! I'm really glad about it and you've safed me a nice day!! |