 Jack.and.Jill.89 6/20/04 . chapter 1:(... aww its sad:(.. but really well done! |
 Bri Black 4/12/04 . chapter 1Wow. Just... wow. That is really simple, but really sad. I love it. |
 thundergoddess 4/11/04 . chapter 1 it'a so cute and sad. you have to add more! i'll read it!
you know you want to! yea so keep it up!
thundergoddess |
 baby girllz 4/10/04 . chapter 1 great! |
 kat 4/10/04 . chapter 1 at first .. i clicked on your fic only kus i recognized the summary - and then i read it. and i find that i really do like it. you took the "original" and detailed it, explaining every line. awesome |
 psyko bunny 4/10/04 . chapter 1 i read that thing somewhere. really sad. :( |