*sniff* that was so sad. but I loved it. I would have liked for Luka and Abby to end up together, but you wrote a good story. Maybe there will be a sequel set when he gets back from Bosnia? *she says hopefully*

OMG...I had to stop reading to say this...I love this story! You're so good at descriptive paragraphs. It's almost like I can *see* it unfold in front of me.

I love how you've written Luka. I love him anyway, but I really love him here.

Now, back to the story. =)

Wow, I love this tale. Beautifully written.

I liked this a lot, you effectively filled a lot of the gaps that TBTB left in this storyline. I particularly liked your invokation of the powerful Luka/Abby scene in I'll Be Home For Christmas, which you have expanded to good effect. Very well done.

i'm reading and liking it...

In reponse to your question, I'm reading this and I'm definitely getting into it! Please coninute - I know this will get very interesting!

Great start! Keep going!

I like it so far. Please continue! :)