Good. Liked it!

Ooh, this is lovely! You captured what they were thinking very well, I think :)

Aww...Cuteness! ^-^

Beautiful written! A nice insider look, and Cutter and Skywise were really into character. I was a little suprised abuot Leetha's look on their bond... Though it was still very realistic. It's as if I never saw that side of Leetha before. But she is a very worryfull person, just like Cutter, so magnificent job!
Write more please!

Beautiful, beautiful! You got into Leetah, Skywise and Cutter's head so wonderfully and played out their inner dealings like you actually were those characters. I love it when you write - you can really pull off anyone, and make it believable. Not many authors can do that. You are truly talented with the (proverbial, in this case) pen! ;)

That was really lovely! What a good writer you are! You really captured the characters well. And the story has perfect balance. Great insights!
Please write more!! Write more EQ fanfics for us! You totally rock!
:)