I really like it and have added it to my fav list please start writting again
i really want to see what happens.

Good work, I love these kinds of stories, but it doesn't look like you'll be continuing them any time soon. Last update 2006. LOL!

Well this is a good idea/start like most this authors works though it seems be incomplete just when it was getting good. I wouldn't say it is as good as the Perception series and I do hope that gets updated some time soon but I do feel this could go far to.

Seriously Ranma is kickass powerful and extremely smart manipulative and all around awesome. I really hope you update again soon

This is pretty kickass. I really hope you update again it has been a long time since the last one

Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.

please start writing chapters for this story again it was one of the best stories i've seen.

its not even really started yet and it is so great please start writing more chapters.

i bet if you do you will get tons of reviews about it.

it was amazing please give me another chapter - something to sink my teeth into.

i must have . . . more!

This is a really good story that I've just discovered. It's unfortunate that it hasn't been updated in so long, but I enjoyed reading it anyway, even if you don't update it again.

Please keep writing this story i will not stop letting you know how much i loved it

till you start writing it again please do the world a favor and keep writing chapters

without people like you with the imagination to come up with brilliant stories like

this we would still be using candles to provide light to the house

Good story even thought there are some flaws as ppl mentioned.
So is ranma a bad guy or a good guy or just another tyrant?

And what will happen whit the Nermia Wrecking Crew... or are they all just minor nuisance?
Anyway i hope you will soon update this.

The story is interesting but you don't have any sign Jusenkyo exists in this the curses are completely missing.

Ranma is believable but over the top. It might have been easier for me to accept if there were a bit more insight to his growing up with Serenities influence. Especially if you had a way to show Serenity as less of a pacifist.

You're too light on puppet content. Hasn't Mako-chan realized that not only did that guy with the illusions look like her old Sempai he was a dead ringer? What reactions have there been among the inners to any of that? Why is Setsuna already labeling them the inners before the outers are even activated?

Isn't the robotic capability to just auto create a fleet a bit of a stretch? I mean sure they have been said to be capable of allot but not everything in just reclaiming the Moon. So how far can they be trusted with the details of making war-ships. And without full AI's just how much control is needed to even make certain they are obtaining all the needed materials instead of just making a whole lot of incomplete-able space frames?

In a way you have a good story but it doesn't have enough of Sailor Moon or sadly even of Ranma. Sure things are going on that would be nearly impossible with aspects from those series but like Akane's cooking just because you used the ingredients doesn't mean it has any of the flavor.

Daniel Thomas Stack
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please update this story.

great, please more!

waste -> waist, Suon -> Soun, Yeah sorry I didn't want to nag just wanted to point some stuff. So far this story is really good and unique (original). Anyway I have not finish reading it but just wanted to say I like it, hope you would update, and thx for the fic.

This has been great work! I hope to see more chapters in the future. Good luck!