Reviews for An empire reborn

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af-zero 2008-08-30 ch 9,	abuseThis is a really good story that I've just discovered. It's unfortunate that it hasn't been updated in so long, but I enjoyed reading it anyway, even if you don't update it again.
Zenoen-the-mac-user 2008-07-18 ch 1,	abusePlease keep writing this story i will not stop letting you know how much i loved it till you start writing it again please do the world a favor and keep writing chapters without people like you with the imagination to come up with brilliant stories like this we would still be using candles to provide light to the house
AmSidar 2008-06-24 ch 9,	abuseGood story even thought there are some flaws as ppl mentioned. So is ranma a bad guy or a good guy or just another tyrant? And what will happen whit the Nermia Wrecking Crew... or are they all just minor nuisance? Anyway i hope you will soon update this.
Daniel Thomas Stack 2008-05-11 ch 9, anon.	abuseThe story is interesting but you don't have any sign Jusenkyo exists in this the curses are completely missing. Ranma is believable but over the top. It might have been easier for me to accept if there were a bit more insight to his growing up with Serenities influence. Especially if you had a way to show Serenity as less of a pacifist. You're too light on puppet content. Hasn't Mako-chan realized that not only did that guy with the illusions look like her old Sempai he was a dead ringer? What reactions have there been among the inners to any of that? Why is Setsuna already labeling them the inners before the outers are even activated? Isn't the robotic capability to just auto create a fleet a bit of a stretch? I mean sure they have been said to be capable of allot but not everything in just reclaiming the Moon. So how far can they be trusted with the details of making war-ships. And without full AI's just how much control is needed to even make certain they are obtaining all the needed materials instead of just making a whole lot of incomplete-able space frames? In a way you have a good story but it doesn't have enough of Sailor Moon or sadly even of Ranma. Sure things are going on that would be nearly impossible with aspects from those series but like Akane's cooking just because you used the ingredients doesn't mean it has any of the flavor. Daniel Thomas Stack Spokavriel @ yahoo . com
Godlykiller2 2008-02-16 ch 9,	abuseplease update this story.
Hommit 2008-01-15 ch 9, anon.	abusegreat, please more!
mythicalprogrammer 2007-12-29 ch 3,	abusewaste -> waist, Suon -> Soun, Yeah sorry I didn't want to nag just wanted to point some stuff. So far this story is really good and unique (original). Anyway I have not finish reading it but just wanted to say I like it, hope you would update, and thx for the fic.
Sdarian 2007-12-10 ch 9,	abuseThis has been great work! I hope to see more chapters in the future. Good luck!
shadowbndg 2007-11-19 ch 9,	abuseOoh, nice story! Other than a few parts were you seemed to overdue a couple words, there isn't really anything wrong. I've only seen ONE spelling error and that was so minor it honestly doesn't matter. Keep up the great work and hopefully this gets updated soon. ()_() (o.o) (^ ^)* ^
harry shall rise 2007-05-22 ch 9,	abuseI like it, please update soon, I miss this story.
ApocSM 2007-05-05 ch 9,	abuseWOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!
naughtyvampire2003 2007-04-13 ch 9,	abuseI really like this story. You have got to update it whenever you can.
Fasor 2007-03-30 ch 9,	abusegreat story :)
An empire reborn 2007-02-18 ch 9, anon.	abuseWow this story shows alot of promise unlike alot of other Ranma/Sailormoon fics out there. I hope you will keep updating this and eventually finish it and not leave it incomplete like aot of the other fics floating around. Anyway Great story!
Ellen Kuhfeld 2007-02-09 ch 9,	abuse"viscous" means it flows slowly - like honey or molasses. "vicious" means a terrible, nasty, out-for-blood combatant or battle.

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