...WOHO! that was awesome! comedy, drama, then comic relief. AWESOME!

Wow... this is amazing!

Epic, sweet, touching... words won't do this gem of fanfiction justice. Definitely one of the best ever fanfictions I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Congratulations, great work and keep it up.

I, too, sat down and read this start to finish. It was beyond belief how in characther they all were, Brock worried, Ash dense and cute, Misty with her romantic mindset.. Very well written, one of the best stories I've read so far. :)

i actually sat down and read this from start to finish and i just wanted to say that it was written so well that i actually believed that this happened to Ash and Co. I hope you write more stories liker this.

Wow. Just... wow. That... that really touched me. I just finished rereading the story, but I had to come back to rereread chapter 9. It was, by far, the best confession scene between Ash and Misty I've ever, ever read, and I've read a lot. I mean... it hurt my heart. The FLASHing, the realization, the grief, the joy, my God! I mean... I don't have the right words. There are no words. I almost cried. I mean... well... I've faced a similar situation as Ash did, and then got rejected. So... I was kind of reminded of that. But this story was just... amazing. The whole thing was, as a whole, almost certainly the best AAMRN ever, but that confession scene was just incredible, and so much more. Bravo. I wish you had charged me for reading that. It felt worth something. You've inspired me.

WTF BRENDANS DEAD!NO!

lol brock i just knew he'd take it the right way...u should make a sequel where misty tries to get may and brendan together..i like the story and i have a feeling im gonna like meowths reaction when he learns tat e needs to give like 200 or 100 bucks to jesse and james

I KNEW IT THE CRYSTALS! wow how the heck did they get back in their bodies?then again the main character never dies soo

Wow this is a really good story i cant pick a fav part of it though

I just finished "Cavern of a Million Colors", and I'm so glad I did. You've written a very in-depth and - dare I say - colorful story that covers the various relationships in the Pokemon world...and in such a way that I found myself antsy when I had to stop reading because of silly things like sleep, work, and food. XD Seriously, though, I thoroughly enjoyed your tale, and can't wait to read another one of your stories. Kudos to you on a great job! ^__^

haha, well, I could find 10 cities with the names of the colors, but I think there was more...I'm not really familiar with the Orange Islands or Johto, so I don't know all the names of the cities (too young to play the games, and that was when my brothers decided to stop watching Pokemon and watch Yu-Gi-Oh! and I didn't have a choice on what to watch)

Onyx! the Pokemon's name is Onix! haha! (I actually had to check if that was how you spelled Onix's name...)

and, it's a Sableye! :) I feel special now! XD

by the way, it's an awesome story so far! :D

OMG WAIT I JUST GOT IT IT'S MAY!

aw :( that's so sad :(:(

this is potentially the best fanfiction i have ever read. no joke. it was well written, had an awesome plot, and did an amazing job of bringing out my emotions

i literally sat up till 2 last night thinking about this story haha and i almost couldnt sleep because i kept thinking haunter was going to get me. that's how much of an impact it made!

i felt proud of myself for picking up on the whole "only soulmates can hear each other when one is alive and one is dead" haha i kept waiting for someone to bring that up until finally misty did and i was like "yes! called it!" haha

amazing work and i just have one question that im a little confused about... who is the girl the ghost saw during the battle?? i think i might've missed something there?

Great job. Great job i don't know if i can point out many improvements that would need to be made except for the flow of the story; it got kind of long and boring during the descriptions and kind of confusing as well. but great plot, setting, dialogue, dialect, and voice.