It's so cool! Please write more soon! I'll...give u a cookie!! ^_^

nice. i hope you update soon. i'm a huge fan of the hades in xena too, although i wish they had made persephone a little more interesting, haha.

Really drab and simple. For anyone to pay attention to a Hades and Persephone story anymore, it has to be GOOD.

wow that was prety good. more?

love it! update asap!

4 words: hades has black hair
2 more words: this sux!

AHH! keep going!

cool start. please update.

...certainly an interesting story, I suppose. Starts off fairly simple, but I'm presuming it'll get more different later...?
Just a few suggestions: first, don't use modernisms. No god would say 'alright', especially as that isn't even a word. It's 'all right' if you *must* use it. 'Chic' is not even worthy of consideration. Gods do not speak like ditzy teenage girls with nothing but air in their heads.
Second, you realise they didn't wear pants in that time period? Pants didn't appear until sometime around the 14th century or something. Highly doubtful that anyone'd wear any.
Lastly, and most important, Hephaestus is the lame god and married to Aphrodite, the goddess of *love and beauty*. He is popularly known as the ugliest of all the gods, he can't walk without help from his two robots, and he's hunched over and bent most of the time.
Please for gods' sakes at least get the god right.