this is an amazing story!! make an epilouge!! please!

hey i like the story but i found a little detail that you need to fix... in a paragraph u put wait for mcgonagall.. but she dead... then later in the chapter you killed her again u brought her back to life then killed her again... well i love the story i dont know what a flame is but this is not it :) well byebye

hehee loved it now on to the sequel!

This story is so sweet!! I love how you put them together at the beginning, you don't see TOO many stories like that. The whole story was great because they really had to go through different obstacles than they do in normal stories. Usually it's Lucius who tries to kill Hermione, but you did Narcissa. This is definitely one of my fav stories!

A/N... I'm sorry to say it but yes, that really was the end. I WILL be having a sequel though.

oh please don't bother. it'll be a waste of bytes here. i suggest you do some growing up first and try writing again when you're 17 in 10 years time. for now, go read winnie the pooh.

i think this story has potential but you're telling it like a 10 year old really just woke up from coma and making out yeesh and eating? i know they're wizards but theyr'e still human to some degree. i think you should grow up some. you want some really good reading go read fanfic by professor mary.

what bullcrap suddenly just like that hermy falls in love with drakie poo? not believable even in fanfic. yeesh.

nice story! where's the sequel though... don't see it.

erm..i was reading this chapter..and it said:

As soon as she entered, a swarm of seventh years surrounded her, asking her questions about the ball. "All of your questions will be answered by the Head of House!" she shouted, praying that they would soon leave her alone. "Ask Professor McGongall.

and then at the bottom it said:

"YES YOU ARE! YOU'VE KILLED, DRACO! You killed McGonagall

is she dead or alive? lol

just wondering..lol.

on to the next chapter!

it was great..i just want you to know that i actually cried when she read that note..it was kinda towards the beginning but it really affected me..i loved it

Done reading the chapter 'Don't Pity Me'. It's great so far!

THAT WAS AWESOME!

one of the most original stories ive found

hey. this story was really good. i'm gonna go read the sequl now

Aw, thats so sad!! I cant wait to read more of your fabulous stories, great creativity!!

i read this story a while back and loved it so i read it again! i still have to read the sequal, but i can't find it...is it with your other stories in your profile? please let me know somehow...thanks