YAY! I love this pairing!

It's okay, Misao! Have you seen the end of the Kyoto arc? Aoshi looks at you, then the rainbow, and SMILES! SMILES!

Oh, now I'm laughing, lol.

Sorry, I laugh at Misao/Aoshi angst, I mean really! Who can WRITE angst about the two? Don't get me wrong, I love the couple to DEATH, but I like romance/humor of them.

I do like this story though! heh.

i wasnt expecting a haiku, lol. i love reading misao/aoshi angst for my... own reasons (i laugh at it) except this one was sad and good. so, good job! off to read some ficcies, lol

I was expecting something else cuz of the title, but Okina's point of view is great ^_^
You are a great writer...POET!

It's nice to know what ppl think bout ur work, that's one of da reasons to write. BUT...PASSION!!

Writing is my passion, I don't do it for anybody, but to know...the sincerty if the reviewers on one's work is cool. That w i know how to imrpove (cuz when we get famous and all, grammar errors aren't that alowed...n I don't want to get anybody lost with the things I wrtite)
My sister keeps telling me that one day I'm going to be famous by my first original story (whihc is extremely ling n it's not finish)
U just reminded m of that ^.^
Well, keep it up with your Passion, that's why it's so great.

PLZ WRITE MORE!I think you need to write more, their is something missing. I lovd it!! ^_^

The last line is fine! I Love the way you write! ^_^

Yes the third line is kind of "er" but it still works. I have to pay attention when I'm reading it or I'll just shove "why can't" in there. Still nice, I like the couple as well.

lovely, ne
anyways, i'd realie like it if you'd write more in these haikus
(when you're famous you can break the rules~)