this was wholly and extremely brilliant, sam is an interesting character and richard rocks in a rather Angel like fashion
now i'm rather hoping for some sort of sequal, any chances of that?

This story is great and so interesting. I was a bit annoyed by the whole concept at first (and I hated Sam) but it's gotten to be very original and a much better take than a parody. It's proof that with good writing you can have characters that look like Sues and have the abilities of Sues (minus the freaky free will annihilation thing)but aren't Sues.

Your story is very well done and extremely creative. I hope you continue writing.

I... I think I love you.

This is a beatiful, riviting, well rounded story all about SUES. It's just... beyond words how wonderful this is.

Beyond cool! :D

I love this story. I adore this story. I'm so sorry I didn't remember I had it on my fav's list until I started flicking through it not too long ago. Sam is great and I love how you have Sues hunting each other down. It would be really interesting if you wrote a story about the beginning, about Katryna Malfoy and Adrastos Riddle discovering themSelves and the sporking of Jackie and how they started the Terrace. You know, the beginning.

Simply amazing! I was not expecting a story like this! I thought it would be a typical (rubish) attempt at a Harry Potter spin off, Good God I was wrong! Brilliat! Please send this to a publisher or something! Mabey even to JK herself! im sure she would enjoy it!! :)

This. Story. Is. Incredible! I know it's been said before in several reviews before me, but you seriously need to turn this into an original story. If you took out the HP, you would have a story that no publisher in his or her right mind would turn down. It's just wonderful! But are you going to write a sequel? I'm dying to know what the deal Richard made with Adrastos was. Please? Such a fantastic story deserves a sequel--or rather, its reviewers do.

-Destroyer of the Elves

P.S.: Woohoo! I'm the 200th reviewer!

Very nice, very original, and also very much like Witch Hunter Robin. I like. 5/5.

I am blown away by your originality. Not only have you plausibly made Sues *canon*, but you've produced a Sue who is... well, not one. Even before she lost her Sue-ishness, I was invested in her well-being; and you set that up perfectly by starting her off as the victim of an attack, and alligning her point of view to the reader's by making her upset and confused.

Jackie Weasley is perfect, because she still seems to have somehow retained an inherent Weasleyness - ie, she's open, friendly and savvy, just like every other Weasley (save, perhaps, Percy.) You get the feeling she would fit in well with the family as a non-Sue.

Richard still retains qualities of Stuishness, though... because he rescued someone, he's ill-tempered, mysterious, the best at what he does, and... oh! Hints of a dark past! The fact that he seems to be one of the sole males here - in charge of a veritable harem of women and girls who look up to him - also leaves a bad taste in my mouth. His dramatic exit in the rain to go save a woman on his own didn't do anything to dispell that good ol' Stu image... so needless to say, he's my least favorite character out of those you've so far introduced, and I hope you intend to follow Sam more than you do him.

Hmm. We all know the stories of Ho!Mione Granger, etc. Was Richard a Harry Stu?

-Kirinin

I started reading this expecting (and hoping) for a parody or a good laugh It quickly drew me in and wouldn't let me go! Excellent work taking a rather silly concept and writing it so well that it took on a life of it's own. Very enjoyable.

I said this before and I'll say this again,

... seriously, take out the HP stuff and you'll get urself a great novel, I'm being perfectly serious... this is... this is... better than Supernaturalist by Eoin Colfer, and he's like my fav author/\/\/\/

you're...great...

in many way... better than a lot of so-called acclaimed writers out there

At first...

...You're actually seriously writing this?...

Now...

...OMFG, you're absolute mothrf$#%ly awesome...

After now...

... If you could scrap the HP stuff out and make a web comic of a book out of this, you'd be more successful than the mega tokyo guys... no I'm not kidding...

I love it.

Hm, I wonder is Kate's Sue getting out of control.

That sounds just like something the Ministry WOULD do-just kill off anybody that they don't classify as human. Listening to the description, I can see why they find Sues dangerous. Anybody who has that much power to influence others' actions has to be a threat. It is typical of them not to see beyond the Sue though or to recognise those who have their Sue under control. That is just the way the Ministry treats creatures like werewolves-seeing them as werewolves even on the 27 days out of every 28 that they are just ordinary humans.

You must have put a lot of work and thought into this fic. I would never have thought of all that.