Love the way you brought Horio to life!

konnichiwa!
sugoi! like the story very muchy! good job in typing it! going to proceed to the sequel. oh yea, i'm not sure whether u realised or not, but u spelled ryoma's name wrong. it is RYOMA and not RYOUMA. there is no 'u' there. nway, i like the story and its really cool when u describe how the seigaku regulars plummet the bad guys! :) thats all and keep up the good work!

Aw...they really do love their OCHIBI-CHAN! ne? ;) lovely fic, poor Ryoma though. Ja!

xD Nice story! Everyone's so in character...

Writing from Horio's POV was unique! That was interesting.

It sounds like you were in the middle of the games with Hyotei when you wrote this. Good job portraying the characters and friendship! I wish people in real life cared more. I also like how you brought in the Echizen family and showed how much they care for one another. It makes more sense when the school nurse calls a student's parents to come pick them up.

Good job proving that tennis is about having fun, not violence. I remember some of the coaches in the anime saying, "Tennis is about having fun." Fuji also said, "Tennis should not be used as a tool to breed hatred." Many people just don't seem to get that.

very nice, poor Ryoma but I love how the attackers were beat! good job.

i just stumbled across this and i really loved it! Horio's POV was an original viewpoint indeed. and I agree with you, it's fun to see how over-protective the senpais can get, like when he was attacked by Akutsu and Eiji said that they were 'waiting for a brawl'...or something like that anyway...

I honestly think you're an obssessed fan-girl. I haven't seen any other writer who uses the suffix 'sama' in their NOTES...

Aw... Seigaku members rule when they're mad and protective of Ochibi-chan! I love Ryoma and I like this a lot, I've always imagined this scenario and didn't think it would actually happen on Fanfiction, whoa Seigaku Regulars is scary! But go RYOMA-CHAN and EVERYONE!! Hate those guys who attacked Ryoma-chan, wanna kick 'em, punch 'em and torture them, heh heh heh...

it's so cute! the way you plotted the story is very well done...i'm going to read the sequel now...i really enjoyed reading the fanfic

very interesting...I think you did a good job overall. Not much mechanical errors...let's see...I like it!

Great story!

nice!

this fic's awesome =3 I read it long time ago and forgot to review but I cam back and reread it again (:

Not what I thought I was going to be like-
But I'm glade I read it.

Great fic. I really enjoyed it. I have a question though. What does "no Ouji-sama" mean? I know that's probably a stupid question, but I have no idea what it means and I'm curious.