finally I find a Storm and Rogue slash fic =), I loved the idea of lightening shocks replacing touch. honestly that was WAY creative!

to me, it seams like you're making them be lesbians.

PLEASE!write more on this story cuz i have been checking on this story ever since i first read it and it needs more to it in my opinion so PLEASE add more!

I just got into comics and I stumbled across this story. It is rather unique, I love it. You just opened me up to Rogue/Storm pairings. I wish you would continue this or write more like it. Ultimate X-Men needs more fics to it's name.

As I'm so new to comic X-Men I admit I'm usually lost when reading fics, especially 616 universe ones (there's just so MUCH history there, everyone dying and being resurected at least once.) It's rather hard to follow. At least Ultimate starts off with a realativly clean slate, although there's not enough Rogue for my tastes and now they've written her out in "Cry Wolf". To top it all they've killed off Remy in Annuals, although it is an interesting twist to have her perminently absorb him rather than Carol.

Wow this has gotten long and your likely to not even read it given hoe long it's been since you originally posted this.

oh. Its really good, i was wondering how you would make them able to touch eachother. Nicely done! Can't wait for you to update!!

That was BEAUTIFUL. Gorgeous femslash. I love the way you had Ororo solve Rogue's contact problem, and the descriptions of electricity were beautiful. It was interesting that "electricity" is so often used as a metaphor to describe romantc chemistry, and it looks like you had a lot of fun with that particular cliche here. Absolutely lovely.

That was really beautiful. I don't even know what to say besides "wow". I will add this to my favorite stories.

This was simply beautiful. I hope you write more.