So Cute! please update soon.

Please update soon! I just can't wait for the next chapter. Your story is really good.

FML. Sorry about the updating thing. I obviously can't read, lol. >.<

I shall use my imagination. :]

Oh. My. God. I have been looking for this story for years. I see it hasn't been updated since 05. Please update it, because this damned story has been haunting my subconscious since I found it all those years ago.

And it wasn't until now that I realized Jakotsu was gay. Silly Freshman me. :]

i love it. rin always seemed like a person who was great with kids. please, please, please write more chapters.

sum people may find dis chap. borin but i use ta wish mi dad woulda tuck me in at nite but i only had a pic. by mi bed tellin it good nite waitin 4 him 2 ** home an see me he alwayz missed 3 years of my life cause of da army an now im 13. n-e-wayz i LUVED dis story 'cept i wanted 2 read more cause now i think im hooked ! lol

Wow. You sure are a dolt, aren't you? First off, if you want to quit, fine but don't act like people were only holding you back. There were a lot of us out there that liked you. Now, you're all 'hey this sucks, I'm gonna write a book, and I'll just ditch everyone who reads my fanfics and tell them to read my book.' Gee, that'll get you good publicity. Yup.

luv yur story! is there any way you can like finish it thoug??

I was looking around these old stories I used to read and suddenly, I see this one. OMG. I can still remember when this was actually being updated! It definitely brought back fond memories of all the stories I loved so much (No More Words, Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan, Snowbound, this one of course, etc). Being the author stalker I am, I was curious to know why it was never finished. So clicked on your profile, and voilà, it seems the real world has stolen you way. Understandable. But then I started reading some of these recent reviews...and they're so rude...regrettable really. But anyways, I wish you luck with your novel.

Wolfpup101: MageofDarkness does not exist to be your personal entertainer/storyteller. What's so stupid about actually doing something with your life instead of wasting it here on fanfiction (something I'll admit to being guilty of too)? If you like this story so much, then why don't you take whatever imagination you have and apply it to creating your own ending?

Broken-Rose-Petals: That's rather rude. I think you should stop sulking and accept that people move on with their lives. Really, if an author wants serious critique, comments like "plz update soon1!!" aren't very helpful. People who act as if their lives depend on an update are...sad, for lack of a better word.

you know your really mean to just leave all your fans like that. some of us really like your stories weather you like them or not. so to say your going off with the big boys is just stupid. a least finish what you stert or are you to chicken that everyones going to hate it. I just think your a big wuss. to scared to finish sme story cause ya tik people are going to judge you fr it. your pathetick.:(

:D LOVED IT!!

This is an awesome story! I am so captivated to it! I love how its set out, and I would be thrilled to read more! Please update!

This story is really awesome. I absolutely love the pairing sesshrin. Anyways love the story!

i guess you're not planning on finishing this, seeing as it was writen 4 years ago, but what you have is very origanal and creative. props! the only flaw i see is that its very...western, that is to say, they are supposed to be in Japan, right? other than that, lovely work.

FYI, delete this story, Mage. It's better for someone to NOT read a story than READ a story and not hear the end of it. It's not nice to the people who WANTED to hear the end. And, you want someone to tell you how to improve your work? Maybe it didn't NEED to be improved. Guys, for those of you that didn't go to this story author's profile, it's not going to be updated. She has officially quit writing fanfics, for those of you that have been waiting FOREVER. I would say a couple other things, but an author that calls their reviewers 'fanboys' and 'fangirls' or something, isn't even worth it.