"Why, hello Horohoro. I didn’t know that you were a salesperson.”

WOW. That was brilliant! I love it. Like your other fics, it has just the perfect sort of immature fighting and hilarious dialogue to work for Horohoro and Ren.

It seems to me that you don't, er, shy away from, as it were, comedy. You don't force it. You just write the crazy impulsive things that Ren and Horo would say in a fight. You don't try to make them sound romantic or poetic and it really works for their characters.

And then you add the perfect amount of description - "Horohoro looked. He hadn’t been crying. Instead he had a ridiculously huge smile on his face." - to make everything flow nicely. Not too short and sudden, like the "Omg I

How very adorable! XD

hehe, i like

Ha! I love this story. You should write a sequel or something...

Bwahahaa~ Funny fic. I can just imagine the two of them fighting and pillows being thrown about.

lol, that was an ace story...hope you write more HoroRen soon!

Ha!!That was good

Haha. 33 seconds -gigglesnort-

Myeh. It would've been kick-** if you'd continued. I have a crappy imagination.

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Chicken Mc**nuggets? That's priceless. I love all of your stories!! This one is exceptioally hilarious! ^^;

oh, c'mon. you can't leave it like that! can ya finish it? *wink, wink* pretty please so we can see what happens?

That was such a good story! I really mean it. That was definutly one of the best that I have ever read!

*smiles brightly* That's a interesting story! Hurry up and continue! I loath waiting! Don't keep us all waiting! :)

Hee.. *bursts out in laughter* Hilarious.. baahaa.. AHEM *favourite author list +1* Hee! YAY!! Happy Birthday, Kitzaku! (I visit your sites regularly)

*is cracking up*
oh this is awsome! So funny! and cute! and wrong!

*eye twitches* Okay, I hate Hororen, but...I'm just going to ignore that for now - this was so CUTE! ^_^