Hi,

I follow this on TTH as DreamOfStories and I recently found this here too! It's kinda neat, and it's going on my alert list...

but I was wodnering if maybe you could update some time? Please?

See I'm being nice, and not threatneing to hunt you down and force you to update at gunpoint or anything sinister like that. I'm also not complaining about how you left hints about how Faith is going to meet Teal'c or Jacob. Being less in 'control' of her instincts... there are bound to be fireworks.

That was a hint by the way in case your stuck on what to do next...

Please update soon - even if its just a chapter that's a measly 750 words long... or 10... or possibly 20 words?

*gives Memet pleading puppy eyes look*

Please?

Great Story!

Good story. please update soon.

I love the story plz update soon

Awesome story ya got here. Please update soon! I wanna know what'll happen after that.

I Need MORe of this! This is such an excellent story.

i can't WAIT for faith to start throwing punches!

incredible story, totally not the direction I thought it would take. congrats on breaking a million cliches. I hope you finish it one day.

*squeal, hug*

I absolutely *adore* your story. I've read more than a few SG-1/Buffy crossovers, and I have to say that this has been a positive joy. It's so *different* from what most of them are like. In addition, I just want to squeal in glee (again!) every time I read about how the Jaffa are reacting to Buffy. Or anytime we get more scenes about Buffy's little coup group (growing not so little with every chapter!) _ Hits all my buttons. So thumbs up for this very, very original piece. And know there is one more person eagerly waiting to read the rest of the story.

And now I'm off to see what other stories you have written.

- M. Shadow

There's no more...

*whimpers*

But...it's...it's brilliant!

*wails brokenheartedly*

You have such and interesting way of expressing your self.

You create her so powerful yet still fascinating not many can pull that off,

Most make it too overpowering and dull.

Yet she is strong and has a wistful way about her.

Keep it up and you will finish the story.

Not that it will be easy far from it you will have to work hard,

Which translates: you must not give up continue to write.

For the ending is only the beginning of a marvel day

Keep it up

Don’t give it up

It is you

her is one of my most like poems

I want to be alone

I see yet I do not see.

What is in front of me.

Blinding light flashes in front of me yet in du not hurt my eyes

I do not stop to wonder way

On word I go. ever searching for what is lost

Never finding what I seek

Always looking ever searching looking for the truth

Ever do I see what lies be for me

All the pain that is in want for me

Ever do I hope it will not come.

But it is in vane

For what I know what is to come.

Will come with all the pain and sorrows of the word

Dalayah Yadayah Hawkins

Copyright 2006 Dalayah Yadayah Hawkins

add a new chapter

I lov Ie love love love love it! I started reading it on Twisting the Hellmouth and was crushed that you were only to chp 17 on both. Please update.

Oh please update! I LOVE THIS!