like!

oh my god! i siriously dont know what to say! lol
its was proberly one of the best and realistic Snape/student story i ever read! well dont. ooh plus it was well writen!
so yey
maria

hmm. not sure if i liked it or not, i think the bit where snape walked in on them was funny, but didnt like the ss/dm ship it was jst a bit annoying. i think he should have used the info he'd gained to make snarky remarks to the two boys during class and embarass them. but then maybe im just mean.

I whish Snape wore my toy lol well its a good story update soon ;)

Very very beautiful ^.^ You do need to write more and tell us what Harry thought of the whole thing. But I liked it very much! Keep it up!

oh dearie me, qiute twisted and perverted, I must say! It gives me all these idea's, it's doubtful I'll ever get around to doing anything with any of them but hey oh well! I do hope you plan on continuing this, please, there is so much stuff, just lying around, wonder what Harry thinks, and what on earth did Draco tell him?

Hi!
I thought you won't post this chapter ever
Like it.. lots
GaB

Wow...that was hot! Snape gets his own private peep show...lucky man! Hm, wonder what evil thing he's going to say? Anyway, the detail in this fic is sensational,and I love the way you characterized Snape. Please continue writing A.S.A.P1

The exclamation points just underscrored how Snape talks-at least I recognized his voice! Even written down!

... Snape getting off on watching Harry and Draco. Not something I really wanted to read, but not bad.

HI!
OMG, this was beautiful. Love SnapeDraco slashyness... and I'm just waiting here for the next chapter!
Please, post mroe.. as soon as you can!
GaB

Absolutely wonderful! I enjoyed your style of writing a great deal, even if I do hold a bit of contempt for you, seeing as you left the story at such a high cliff-hanger. But, so goes it. I look forward to your next update!
~Vejita

Well, it's an interesting beginning. But I do have a small complaint-- there are far, far too many exclamation marks and ellipses. They really distracted from the actual writing.

The exmation points annoyed me. and i got a little confused, not the best i've read but ok. work on the exlamation thing.. its annoying:p

Well, it was pretty good. The only thing that really made me blood-thirsty mad was how many times you used an exclaimation point (!). Those are used to for shouting. You were using them in every sentence, even the ones that were merely statements. I was reading the story and having to scream in my head. Owie. Anyway, it looks okay.