*“You love him so much that you’re off kissing women when he’s not around?”

Usagi let go of Haruka and turned to Rei, completely taken aback. “I what?”

Yaten lost it and began laughing so hard he had to hold on to Taiki to keep from falling over, and Taiki looked distinctly amused. Seiya hid a smirk as Usagi turned bright red.*

LOL! Those are seriously the best lines in this story! I love it! Love to see what you end up with...or is the end of the story? I hope not.

Imagi

please update i love ths story

“I serve the princess.”

I LOVED that. ^_^ Hotaru rocks being so kick-** cool. Anyway, great story. I really liked the dialogue as it was very good to read and it flowed easily.

I'd like to see a continuation someday. :)

Oo; Oh... My... God...

That was great. Especially Chapter 3, when it all comes crashing down...

And making Hotaru so badass... That was perfect =3

The story was really good, though ^^; Mamoru gets what he deserves!

Intresting fic. However this chapter did confuse me some. Anyway, I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter.

oh geeze, i don't like Mamoru either. I thot i was the only one! =) Anyway this is a good fic so far, and i hope it continues to be. Update soon!

Firstable, forgive my poor english. I have already read your Fan Fic “Touching Eden”, and I understood it very well… it’s just that i can’t Express myself clearly in words, english words ˆ ˆ my language is spanish ;) But let me tell you that your fic is PERFECT! I liked it a lot!! It’s very funny, and interesting.
… I think it’s weird coinceiving Usagi sleeping with Seiya, weird but original… Not forgetting the surprise you gave me with the point “Mamoru is not Chibi-usa’s real father”! You must be joking!... But I liked it too!
What more? Hm, your third chapter was the best one (for me), ‘cause finally Mamoru is IN the history!... What will he do now?! Poor Mamoru ;_; he still loves her! I can´t wait for see what’s next! Upgrade soon, girl! I really need it! Upgrade, I’m sure you have a great and the enough pottencial (and material) for finish your history! I don’t know, get inspired, use your criminal mind! Hahah, just upgrade, ok?;) Kss.
GabYxA
Note: Congrats! i like your style :P

This is a really good story. Update soon please.

Aaw. Poor Mamoru. I'm afraid that I'm not very familiar with Seiya, Yaten, and Taiki outside of fandom because nobody has yet seen it fit to dub the Stars Season, and from what I've seen of Mamoru, he doesn't seem like a bad guy, so I do sympathize with him here, even if the storyline is rather good.

-D.Hamadryad

Did I miss something, or did the story just jump ? Neway, it's still really good !

So far I'm enjoying Usagi's spunky attitude, but the sleeping with Saffiru, Demando AND Seiya- that's a bit too feisty for her initial character. However, this is your fic, so continue how you want it, and I'll read and review ! S/U Forever !

Aww...Poor Mamoru... I really do like his character, it just seems Usagi needs a change of scenery, ne? Anyways, loved this chapter...Owari.
~KazeShinai

cool but i hate mamoru so the whole "i still love her""i know" Factor ** me off but other than that good story.

aww poor mamoru. he needed a hug.

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