HI! Wow, this is pretty good! Though, I adcise getting the grammar and spelling checked, it kinda confuzzled me... OH, well... Very good! OFFICIAL SEAL OF AWESOMENESS! oh! You should know who I am, huh? Yep yep!

Strange, but funny! Keep writing! Love Always- Aeglos, the SnowPoint Spear

oh...painful...bye bye cannon...pass the Bleepka.I'm sorry, but please for the love of god get a Beta reader! i can forgive you this once, as i also find spelling difficult. but try a little harder. i mean 'Suron, Aarogon' there's two new mini Balrogs right there.why did she say all that anyway?

Way too many spelling errors to make this enjoyable to read.